It’s the time of year again for creepy stories…here ya go!
LET’S PLAY
If you can guess what I have in my pocket, you can have it.” He patted the right pocket of his dirty overalls as he approached.
Glancing around, I discovered I was alone down here with this small skinny boy. How could I be alone? I’d followed at least a dozen other commuters through the turnstile before descending to the platform. I backed away quickly, trying to recall which way I should run to reach the subway steps leading up to the street.
“No thank you,” I replied.
“You don’t even want to guess?” he asked, more aggressively.
I couldn’t move. I don’t know why. I think it was his eyes. They were an iridescent green I had never seen before.
“I’m not very good at guessing,” I told him. Again, I managed to take a few steps back.
“You’re just like the rest of them. Nobody ever…
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Holy hell, this was good!!!!
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Thanks so much Marie! Coming from you…that means a lot!
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Loved reading this again and still am amazed at your imagination and creativity!
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Happy to know you still visit me here!
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This story is awesome!! Good pacing, sweet suspense, just the right amount of details. And the ending was superb. LOVED IT!
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Wow! Thanks so much! Glad you like it!
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